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Getting Hooked

Check out today’s post on AuthorsNow! on books that have hooked me. And looking for ways to hook readers? Come back to my blog later this week for tips on how to do just that (plus the pros and cons of each).

Library Blog Challenge

There are educational cuts beings made all around NJ. Unfortunately, school libraries often take the hit. Help keep resources alive for our students, one library at a time.

This is a library-loving blog challenge, mine focusing on a NJ school library!

For every commenter on this post between now and March 27th, I will donate $1.00 to the Burlington City Junior School library. Regardless of comments, the minimum I will donate is $25.00, and the max is $50.00.

How easy could it be? You comment, I cough up the money, the library gets a gift! If you don’t know what to say in your comment, “I love libraries” will do.

Note that my pledge is “per commenter”—so if a single person leaves 50 comments, that still only counts once! But you can do more by spreading the word … please link to this post, tweet about it, and send your friends here so they can comment and raise more money.

If you’re moved to make a flat-fee donation to your library, or to start your own challenge, you are quite welcome, and please leave that information in the comments.

For a complete list of participating bloggers (and to visit other sites where you can help libraries just by leaving a comment!) visit the writerjenn blog at http://writerjenn.livejournal.com/

 

 

 

 

The Wall

Here is the scenario. You’re coasting along in your writing world. Your characters are gelling–more than gelling, even. They’re interacting, volleying the scenes back and forth with you, going places you didn’t think they would. The setting is developing. There are trees, basketball courts, evil principals’ offices, maybe the kitchen table takes on symbolic meaning. And the plot! Well, it’s perfection. Not only is the story progressing, but it’s doing so continuously, excitingly. There’s no lack of pacing at all. You’re super proud of yourself and pat yourself on the back or get that pudding pop break you’ve been craving. Then you’re back, ready to move forward from where you left off. Of course, that’s when it happens. You hit a wall.

In cartoons this is very cute, and the character always bounces off the wall and then keeps on running. In my world, it’s not cute. I stare at the screen, minimize it, maximize it, look at it from another angle. But that doesn’t work. Then, I minimize the screen again and play Bejeweled Blitz or Scrabble on Facebook. Surprisingly, that doesn’t help either. Through all this, I wonder what happened. Where did I go wrong? When the wall smacked me in the face in the past, I thought my story was flawed. Maybe there were holes. There always are in the first draft. But that itself wasn’t enough. And just because there were holes, was no reason to scrap the idea (which is where my brain often went–into a sprial like on those water slides, thinking that there was nowhere to go now but down, into a centimeter of water. Ouch!). I’ve grown as a writer enough to know that the story does have promise but I will have to dig to find out what happened. And, most important, not give up on it–which would be the easy way out.

Part of the problem may be that I detest outlines. But, when the wall rushes at me, that’s what I always end up doing: stop the staring contest with the screen and make a mini outline. What happened so far, where do I see it going, what’s stumping me? It’s not a huge, three page outline, just a few paragraphs, and sometimes this helps. With my current WIP, it did not. This story is totally plotted. I know the characters. I know what has to happen to create the climax and add suspense. My issue with the WIP is that I don’t know how to move the story quickly enough to get it to the climax. So I have a different solution. My next plan is to just write random scenes I know–the big climax scene, the 3 scenes before that that set everything in motion, the ending. I don’t normally work like this, but it’s better than the alternative and at least I’ll be working on scenes that interest me.

What do you do when the wall emerges from the curtain and pops you in the kisser? How do you bounce back?

My Cover

So I got my cover this week and it has been so exciting to see it. Makes everything that much more real. And what has been wonderful as well was all the supportive comments I got since I posted about it–from friends, family, fellow writers. One Tenner, Blythe Woolston, said something that summed up my hopes. “The cover will become more meaningful as the reader experiences the book. The first experience, however, is going to be ‘I want that book.'” I thought this was so kind.

People have asked if there are butterflies in the book. The book is not about a world of butterflies, but yes, butterflies are significant. The color red of the butterfly is important. The water, the reflection, the backwards N. I’m hoping people will read this book and see how all fits in, and I’m just so ecstatic Flux incorporated so many things so perfectly.

And, in case anyone could not see the full cover on the Tenners site (because I know not all the techie stuff). Here it is below. Happy happy!


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Tenner Shout Out

Tomorrow, we’ll go back to our regularly scheduled programming (or kind of regular)–another installment of Writing Wednesday–but today I want to give a shout out to fellow Tenner, Jen Nadol. Her debut novel, THE MARK, came out today! So exciting! To learn more about the book, go here, and to enter Jen’s fantastic on-line launch party and contest (A LOT of prizes), go here. And if you haven’t gotten the book, go to a bookstore. Like now. 🙂

Yay, Jen! Congrats!